Thank you Angie and Sharon
Many thanks for thoroughly and analytically editing my manuscript. I really appreciate your suggestions and encouraging comments. This novel was my attempt to learn how to become a writer. Meantime with this project (putting together prose and lyrics, plus composing the music) eventually became too colossal to grasp alone. Nevertheless, I was determined to finish it off. I set a deadline for myself as 15th September 2017. I was lucky to come across to PaperTrue website and I am greatly honored by the work you, my editors have done for me. I will go through your suggestions and comments, also I will “kill a few of my darlings” to complete the novel.
I have already started writing my new story. This one is about two young boys, (12 and 14 years old cousins) of an elite Nazi family in Berlin. The story takes them by an accident to Britain at the beginning of Second World War. There, their lives completely change and transform. Hopefully I will finish it next year, around late spring. Of course, I will send the manuscript to you to edit it.
Many, many thanks for your encouragement! If ever (keep the fingers cross!) my novel become published, I will certainly acknowledge PaperTrue and you, my editors. If you like me using your surnames, I would be delighted to put them also there.